I think his mistakes are that he stopped working hard to make his business a seuccess. If he kept keep working hard, he wouldn't have some difficulties. However, thanks to these difficulties, he could succeed greatly. If we don't want to undergo some hardshis, he should not stop working.
If this presentation were a argumentative essay, thesis statement is that how to success. By talking his failure by himself, he want to tell us the way to succeed and how not to failure, I think. After watching this presentation, I began to think that I will not suttisfied with the condition at this moment and I should keep working.
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