On success

I think his mistakes are that he stopped working hard to make his business a seuccess. If he kept keep working hard, he wouldn't have some difficulties. However, thanks to these difficulties, he could succeed greatly. If we don't want to undergo some hardshis, he should not stop working.
If this presentation were a argumentative essay, thesis statement is that how to success. By talking his failure by himself, he want to tell us the way to succeed and how not to failure, I think. After watching this presentation, I began to think that I will not suttisfied with the condition at this moment and I should keep working.

Internet

I use internet almost everyday. My favorite web site is Facebook. I have two reasons for use Internet.
Firstly, I use facebook everyday. This site allows me to communicate with not only my friends but also people all over the world. If you use facebook, you can know that what my friends are doing now and we can let people know what I am doing now. It is so interesting.
Secondly, I use internet so that I can get the information about korean idol. There are a lot of information which I am interested in.
As mentioned above, internet is a part of my life. Without internet, I can't do anything, I think.